The top image is what I considered to be my completed contents product. I handed this over for some constructive criticism from my tutors.
-The one mentioned by both was that the space wasn't used efficiently. Although there is a background image used to cover the space because I've reduced the saturation it seems dull. Also because the image isn't grasping action it's dull with minimal movement. This is reflected upon the page.
- The editors not too formal and also not bold enough to connect with the audience.
-Spacing and layout isn't clear the images at the top of the page look messy and misplaced. Especially the one referring to Alex Mountford and Band stand.
-Including the Facebook logo is good and fits with the codes and conventions needed for this page however it would be nice to see ways the audience could contact the company directly
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-The contents section is too small, the font size should be increased to fill the page more vertically or add more articles and page numbers to fill the remaining space above and below.
This image below is my new and improved contents page after taking on bored the constructive criticism.
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